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Open Poetry #28

For The Rose

Suede
Junior Member

since 2003-08-25

Posts 38
Drifting on the soul

0 posted 2003-08-26 07:40 AM

The Rose which grew from concrete
Scattered into the whirwind
Lost without a cause
Searching through intermission
Just like you told
Trapped
To relate
To understand
I wish
Seclusion is the only company
For the Rose who grew from concrete
I still wonder

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-08-27 02:26 AM

This is wonderful in thought, and I believe it needs to go back to the front!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-08-27 07:20 AM

a beautiful write...

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-08-27 07:25 AM

A rose in concrete..

This reminds me of something I wrote when I was still a little younger, about an imprisoned butterfly..

How we can imagine beauty in places that it has been shunned.

Creatively written, I love it.

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