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Open Poetry #28

yesterday was a sad day

idonthaveaname
Junior Member

since 2003-08-19

Posts 15

0 posted 2003-08-26 02:22 AM

i'm sad i never knew you, how i could have-
or sad you never knew me, the way you should.
is there something i could have done?
one sentence i could have said?

you took the rope, your fate in hand

its funny how you realize, just what you've done
when it's a little too late.
did you wish for one last breath,
when your last was gone?

could i have been that breath?

RIP- your last day- 08/24/03
you will be missed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-08-26 05:24 AM

I know this feeling

lived it twice

peace to you

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-27 07:30 AM

*sniffles*

this is just so heartfelt and real,
to be one's last breath..

It's yearning..

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2003-08-27 08:21 AM

Wow, this one is an eye-opener. If only we could realize how much of a difference we can make BEFORE its too late... Great write.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-08-27 08:36 AM

Even though we have certain circumstances in our lives beyond our control we are still obliged not to take advantage of others and to treat others as we would like to be treated.

that is the message I received from this lovely poem. Thank you

DbarrM
Junior Member

since 2003-08-26

Posts 14

5 posted 2003-08-27 08:38 AM

I feel your Pain, My Heart goes out to you.

DbarrM

A life never dies. It just spreads out to all other living things. They are not gone. They are in all of us.

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