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Open Poetry #28
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Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 101
0 posted 2003-08-25 11:55 PM

I hate how you hurt me,
and the way you lost control.
I hate how you did what you did,
and the way you can never take it back.

I hate what you have made me,
and the way you didnt mean it.
I hate the way you look at me,
Knowing you dont look the same.

These are just a few of the many things I hate about you,
But the thing I hate most is that you are me!
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SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts
1 posted 2003-08-25 11:58 PM

Woh, I love it.  Its so good and I can feel your feeling especially since you sound like me.  I really really like this poem.
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