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vandana
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0 posted 2003-08-25 07:41 PM



Don't wanna to hear
Those things will hurts us
Looking back
With those years
Wanting to get back on track
Those years of memories were
on my mind
Don't wanna to hear
those crazy things going
on my life
Don't wanna to hear those
things will hurt us
Take them away
To the highest ground
Let the heaven be there
for me
Don't wanna to hear those things
will hurt us
Looking back
with those years
Wanting to get back
With those years
Those years of memories
were on my mind
Don't wanna to hear
those czary things
going on
my life
I just wanna those memories
on my heart again

© Copyright 2003 vandana - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2003-08-25 08:40 PM


Vandana . . .
this is absolutely beautiful

Don't wanna to hear those
things will hurt us
Take them away
To the highest ground
Let the heaven be there
for me

I needed to hear this today
thank you
xxoo

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-08-25 08:54 PM


Emotions felt, and understood.
Namaste, dear friend.

Tim
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Posts 1794

3 posted 2003-08-26 12:07 PM


Nicely written Vandana.  Enjoyed your poem.
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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4 posted 2003-08-26 12:28 PM


beautifully penned,,

     


Nan
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5 posted 2003-08-26 07:52 AM


Very nicely penned, vandana...
NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
6 posted 2003-08-26 09:42 AM


A wonderful write filled with much emotion.

Huggles, Marti

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-08-26 09:56 AM


vandana
Enjoyed the read.

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
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Ohio, USA
8 posted 2003-08-26 09:56 AM


Memories really are beautiful treasures...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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