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Open Poetry #28

Metaphorphasize

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-08-25 07:03 PM

in this poetry
i can hide
secrets
that cannot touch
the lips of daylight,

from mixed up scrabble tiles,

codes and metaphors,
metamorphasize,

from catapillars
of unspoken thoughts,

to a release
of truth

in a flight
of butterflies.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-25-2003 11:29 PM).]

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

1 posted 2003-08-25 07:15 PM

enjoy your read

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

2 posted 2003-08-25 10:36 PM

I like several of the lines in this poem. Nice little write. Just like I like em...short and sweet....delicious!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-08-25 10:44 PM

Michele, this has got to be the most beautiful and intriging description of
exactly what it is that we do in here . . .
*smile*
xxoo

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-08-26 12:34 PM

have my net,, catching the butterflys,,
nice write n read,,

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-08-26 12:38 PM

I hear ya..

Bootiful

RomanticPoet
Junior Member

since 2003-08-25

Posts 34
Florida USA

6 posted 2003-08-26 12:40 PM

I like this, simple but complex....

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ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

7 posted 2003-08-26 01:30 AM

a sweet poem

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-08-26 02:01 AM

awesoe mishy

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

9 posted 2003-08-26 08:23 AM

psychological surgery, your writing weaves, avoiding the? Nice write.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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