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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
0 posted 2003-08-25 11:59 AM


How Could We
~ By Sue ~

Two days in a row
I gave it a try to see
How I would feel then
I did not feel the passion
I once felt with him before

He appears to want
Me back with him once again
The fear is too great
To even give him  a chance
Success is not mine just yet

My feet I do want
To get firmly on the ground
Then maybe I will
Try another time with him
But this is not in my plan

Without the passion
I once felt with him back then
How could we ever
Make it together again
The memories are still strong

8-25-03
© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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1 posted 2003-08-25 12:01 PM

Very good here.I can feel the strong emotions from within while reading this.You'll know which is the path to take, for it's the one that will bring you ultimate happiness.
Crystal
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2003-08-25 12:01 PM

SmartChick - plant them feet firm until you're ready...

BC
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2003-08-25 12:02 PM

SmartChick
Well done, that is a problem.
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-08-25 12:14 PM

WOW.. I love the strength you have. The presence of mind to know all you feel, and that you have to be strong-minded about it. hehehe Girl power, maybe. Nah..that's a bunch of baloney that women's lib stuff, but you know what I mean!! Be strong. I loved this.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-25-2003 12:15 PM).]
Nan
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5 posted 2003-08-25 06:21 PM

Isn't it just amazing how we grow emotionally, Sue - Glad you're doing so well...
vandana
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6 posted 2003-08-25 07:18 PM

enjoyed this
garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-08-26 02:36 AM

Sue, only you can make up your mind what
is best for  YOU.  
Hugs  
Ethel
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displaced
8 posted 2003-08-26 02:42 AM

hang in there
ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2003-08-26 08:02 PM

Sounds like you have given much thought to what you want and need...portrayed very well in this write.  Keep going...you will get there. TD
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-08-26 08:57 PM

Yes how could you...one step at a time...but on a firm foundation...patience...James
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