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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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A woman's history writes itself easy in her temperament pressed between the pages fading over time. Slightly frayed in tattered verses lending character to her words alternating between second thoughts each chapter well defined. A clear viewing as both the heroine and the villain a hardcopy neatly bound self edited between the lines. Searching for the meaning as a reader and a writer, as a woman to be accepted and understood remaining true to herself. Pouring through an open book hearts race beside each other contemplating love with each turn of the page, opened up. Captivated by hopes and dreams wiping away tears that sorrow brings for all that was lost, twisting the plot contemplative in the end. Left to question why and how the story line played out in stages acted upon and what it's really all about. Book marked in a time and place with quiet acceptance when the ending nears to draw on the meaning years from now while pondering my novel lover. ~Duly noted to my muse~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (08-24-2003 06:57 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
beautiful thoughts,,, |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A novel approach to the deepest of thoughts ... here's to thinking of the Blue's. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
My dear, You are the epic novel...twin in wonder and in wealth. Beautiful. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and so it is written.......... as is as you've said, so completely on the subject real nice stuff girlielocks |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Left to question why and how the story line played out...." A central part of any life well lived. Great stuff! Thank you for sharing it. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori Always such a pleasure to read your poetry...it speaks your heart so well. :Hugs; |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesy . . . this reads like a love story . . . I adore it and here; Searching for the meaning as a reader and a writer, as a woman to be accepted and understood remaining true to herself. THAT is a whole lot of searchin to be doing . . . *smile* tweets xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I've been hoping for another treasure for my library, and you've gifted this one. Lori, thank you, for pouring a goblet full of fine thoughts. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Qj~ thank you for reading me. always~ Craig~ Thank you for thinking of me in blue.  Kathleen~ I am so grateful to be sharing the same page with you. And I do thank you, thank you! Love you too girlielocks~ hug~ There is your wisdom all over again, thank you for sharing it with me icebox~ Martie~ If you only knew the pleasure you bring when I see your name here. Hugs back at you~ Tweets~ I have searched long and hard for that little something that makes a difference. Does this sound like I'm digging to deep? hmmmmmmmm, thanks. Kacy! Thank you for paying me the finest compliment! My cup runneth over right about now! Thank you sweet lady~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"A clear viewing as both the heroine and the villain a hardcopy neatly bound self edited between the lines. Searching for the meaning as a reader and a writer, as a woman to be accepted and understood remaining true to herself." Sorry it took me so long to get here Loribell, but last time I was in a hurry was around '93, and I'm a bit out of practice...  (I'm glad you edited that one line, it wasn't you, I didn't think...) It's a delicate balance sometimes, this edge you learn to walk, but it really is just a matter of trusting...yourself. Yeah, I know being blonde and all, that can get kinda scary, huh?  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Don't be feeding me that blonde line again Duncan! No really, you made my night!!! lol~ Thanks goob~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (08-26-2003 09:32 PM).] |
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