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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-08-25 09:58 AM





Smoothe
as the chimes
at a musicians hands
your spirit sweeps over me
softly you fall on my thoughts
my heart feels yours
as I'm tightly held
so close
My head rests
on your chest
comfort,
sweet comfort
is mine.
Soul-to-soul.
With you
I feel
whole.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-08-25 10:38 AM


SharaRose,
Know the feeling, enjoyed the write.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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2 posted 2003-08-25 10:38 AM


Soul-to-soul.
With you
I feel
whole.


How I love these words and love all of your poems. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

Huggles, Marti

Suede
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3 posted 2003-08-25 10:44 AM


A great poem, i really enjoyed reading it, short but sweet, swfit and precise
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4 posted 2003-08-25 10:56 AM


Shara, this is a wonderful poem.
I know how it feels, too, and it's marvelous.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-08-25 10:56 AM


Soothing, comforting--food for the soul!


EA

Patricia
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6 posted 2003-08-25 11:08 AM


Oh, SharaRose...this is so lovely.  I do remember this feeling.  Thanks for reminding me how good it can be!

Patricia

El_Campeador
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7 posted 2003-08-25 11:12 AM


Lovely poem...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

waxing poetic
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8 posted 2003-08-25 11:33 AM


quote:
Soul-to-soul.
With you
I feel
whole.


These words right here ... I know them so well in my own way.  Enjoyed this very much!

WP

SharaRose
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9 posted 2003-08-25 11:51 AM


Thank you so much to all of you. I respect all your work so this means alot to me.

Seymour- I am glad you know this feeling. It's the emotions that bring so much joy!!

NewEnglandLazurlu- Thank you so much for your comment. It means alot coming from you and so many like you that I respect your writing. Just beautiful as always. Thanks!

Suede- Thank you so much for making me a part of your reading today. I can see you are new. I will be looking for your writes, and look forward to reading you. Bless ya for making me a part of your start here.

garysgirl- I appreciate these words. Your writes are always a delight for me to read, and like all the others here I'm never disappointed. Yes, these are the feelings that make it worth it all at the end of the day!

Earth Angel- That soul-to-soul feeling does give comfort, and soothe lifes bumps along the way.  

Patricia- You are so very welcome! Feeling whole is a gift I think. It doesn't happen many times in life, I don't think anyway.

EL_Campeodor- Thank you for your kind words.

All of you are such amazing writers I appreciate your opinions.

Big to you all,
SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-25-2003 11:58 AM).]

SharaRose
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10 posted 2003-08-25 11:56 AM


Hello WP--Thank you for making me a part of your reading today, too. I can see you are new, too. You, and one other made my poem a part of your reading today. I am glad you liked, and can relate. Very sweet of you to say. Bless ya bunches, too.

Big
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2003-08-25 11:58 AM


SharaRose - a lovely way to be together...

BC

SharaRose
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12 posted 2003-08-25 12:00 PM


Hi BC, thanks. It is the nicer part of life isn't it!

Big
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
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13 posted 2003-08-25 12:15 PM


I long for the moment when I feel this way with someone truly in heart and soul.You are such a lovely poetess that I always read what you've written.Beautifully done my friend
Crystal

SharaRose
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14 posted 2003-08-25 12:22 PM


Awwww Angelblueeyes...I appreciate so much your words. What a sweet thing to say. Bless ya bunches,too. I just believe your special someone is just around the corner. Always be sure to look with eyes wide open. Sometimes what seems unlikely might just be the most likely one. Bless your heart. This was so sweet. BIG

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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15 posted 2003-08-25 12:45 PM


Jesus Shara, this is pure sweet silk
perfection . . . beautiful writing
xxoo

SharaRose
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16 posted 2003-08-25 12:48 PM


Thanks LittleWing...You are always a sweetie pie to be there with encouragement!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2003-08-26 08:55 PM


Yum, this was good...James
SharaRose
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18 posted 2003-08-27 12:43 PM


Thanks James...I'm glad you liked. I love those favorite times of bein' close.!!


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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