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Open Poetry #28

Protect your heart

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-08-04 09:14 AM

The chill of the air is sharp
as the dark clouds begin to form
You can tell by the uneasy silence
It’s the calm before the storm

The fear starts to rise
A feeling from deep within
Reminding you to take cover
Not to get caught in it again

Before you even realise
the rain is pouring down
You never had the chance
To find some solid ground

Caught in the middle
Not knowing which way to turn
You let the storm control you
In hope of it ending soon

The damage has been done
And the storm has left its mark
The fear has been instilled
Deep within your heart

FH © July 2003

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-08-04 09:17 AM

Fee! It's been so long since you graced the blue pages! Don't disappear like that - we've missed you!

Good metaphors on storms, m'dear. They can most certainly catch you unawares...

So good to have you back!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-08-04 09:18 AM

Before you even realise
the rain is pouring down
You never had the chance
To find some solid ground

so very true...and a perfectly timed poem...for me.

Nicely done
M

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2003-08-04 09:34 AM

Hey Sunshine, Thanks for the welcome back. I did not realise just how long its been,it has been awhile.

Nakdthoughts, remember with each storm the clouds always have a silver lining.

Its nice to be back.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0 Just
((T)) Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

kaleanna
Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 89
TX, USA

4 posted 2003-08-21 02:55 PM

very expressive, wonderfully written,

enjoyed it

Meesh

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