Open Poetry #28 |
A Perfect Nightmare |
Zengo Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 31Rogersville, AL |
A little red box, With a shine ring, 24k platinum it was, Just like I had always imagined it, I remember the look on her face, God, it was beautiful, Magical tears, She didn't say a word....overcome, The white lace, A deep breath as she walked the asle, ........that look, Magical tears, I didn't say a word......... The screen, A figure....a boy, Months...months...., A cry....a snip, .......that look, Magical tears, We didn't say a word......... She lies asleep, I watch....amazement, Your breath..your beauty, That wonderful smile, Just to hold you........ Ring.....ring..... ....ring (AWAKE!!!) I open my eyes, Looking over at the little red box, Setting on my dresser, The pain of reliving, "NO" everyday.... [This message has been edited by Zengo (08-21-2003 02:33 AM).] |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Clever twist! May this "nightmare" become a romantic "dream"! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Zengo Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 31Rogersville, AL |
Thanks for your insight JilGirl! [This message has been edited by Zengo (08-21-2003 02:29 PM).] |
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Zengo Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 31Rogersville, AL |
Sorry double post [This message has been edited by Zengo (08-21-2003 02:28 PM).] |
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