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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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To Know Harbored in the coming of purple’s twilight embracing a belief searching for a star  Looking for one that outshines all others the first that would shine that night as the star rose into the heavens the wind rushed searching rushing to whoosh into her ears bringing along the words of the star in a whisper I am yours Green eyes fastened onto the radiant white beam light-years away yet a stretch of slender hand, palm up, held the star aloft with gentlest touch Like a star out of reach love is there, when you know and when you know, then the darkest blue-black of night will envelope you tuck you in keep you warm safe in the promise And in that promise, to know there is one, just as the first star is the one that, with a stretch of slender hand, palm up, you might hold aloft with gentlest touch to bring the smile to know to believe I am yours [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-24-2003 01:08 PM).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Looking for one that outshines all others to know there is one, just as the first star is the one that, with a stretch of slender hand, palm up, you might hold aloft with gentlest touch ======================= this is a beautiful expression of the comfort in knowing of the certainty of love...these are such great lines... sp  just a hang-up call and the quiet breathing of our persian we call cajun on a wednesday... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Delightful read.  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Like a star out of reach love is there, when you know and when you know, then the darkest blue-black of night will envelope you tuck you in keep you warm safe in the promise Oh yes, sweet Karilea.... You know that I know....  I'm keeping this. Hugs  Ethel |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
when you know you know all you need to know I know I know a good poet too! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
There is a sanctity in love that transcends all other feelings. You express that so well. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
expressed well,, nice hat,,, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
yes, to know.. and I know, that this poem is magnifique.. just like you my sunshinygirl  you're a star! and I love you photo Maree. fate is not just |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful words, many a man would love to hear or say them. Well done KJ. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea This is filled with love-magic...Beautiful! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
A keeper!  This shines Karilea. I love it. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
god yes! now this is what I'm talking about  *sighs for an eternity*If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful words and a lovely new pic!! hugs to you sweet lady, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Like a star out of reach love is there, when you know and when you know, then the darkest blue-black of night will envelope you tuck you in keep you warm safe in the promise ----------- to bring the smile to know to believe I am yours I know I've picked my favorites from your pen before... but this jumps to the top of the list. *S* Absolutely beautiful!!! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So pretty!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This shines, Sunshine! Positively etherial! Core |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Going to the library [This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (08-25-2003 04:34 PM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And in that promise, to know there is one, just as the first star is the one that, with a stretch of slender hand, palm up, you might hold aloft with gentlest touch to bring the smile to know to believe I am yours You don't know how much this touched me, Karilea...Come to think of it maybe you do. And you know, too, I think you are wonderful! Patricia |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karilea . . . this made me feel safe . . . thank you I love your picture! xxoo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
OH this is wonderful. And I love the picture too. Sandra |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Some top notch lines you have written here, enjoyed muchly. Nicely penned and expressed. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Sunshine../\..indeed, sings and sings; a lovely poem../\..Spiros ----------The Stars--- |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea...this is absolutely gorgeous. I tried to pick out a favorite part, but to do so would not do justice to the 'whole' of it. So beautiful...it whispers... "My friends are my estate." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
comforting and warm to know |
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