alright then, we'll have a go of this... it's a thing about loss

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lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2003-08-24 01:04 AM

The style reflects a bit of Martie who needless to say has been a huge influence in my work, the artsy look comes from my mother in law's "dislike" for the boring prose format, her and Nancy would get along great. (English teachers, doncha love 'em).

The title phrase "...like a faery," used by permission. (Rosemary J. Gwaltney) and if you are interested in that piece... it can be found at...
http://www.angelfire.com/mo2/goldleavesinwinter/opearlofmine.html

... like a faery

all that’s left are these

few pieces of Kodachrome laced
throughout a withered album and as
the years roll by I feel so much more
the missing many but I'll be seeing
you again as always you keep
me hanging like a faery
in the spoil of
dream

&

reminisce
where reflections paint
my wander and you meet me under
the wind of October and we go walking
again in sand of remember down by the
willow when the leaves of crispy
come & aren't you a bit
nippy here
wear
my
coat
come on
lets watch the
leaves float ... away
away ....... away
hanging like
a faery

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

[This message has been edited by lucky (08-24-2003 02:45 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-24 01:17 AM

"you meet me under
the wind of October and we go walking
again in sand of remember down by the
willow when the leaves of crispy
come & aren't you a bit
nippy here
wear
my
coat"

This screams with imagery.. Love it!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2003-08-24 04:15 AM

Oh yes!!! I'm certainly glad that you had a go at this, as it is wonderful, and I like the layout...I'll be eagerly waiting for more now...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-08-24 11:11 AM

BRAVO!
Lucky, I loved this read, and the form.

Hope Martie reads this one, and Nan too!

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2003-08-24 11:59 AM

BRAVO from me, too!

This is lovely to read and to look upon.

WOW!

Clap Clap Clap Clap

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

5 posted 2003-08-24 02:39 PM

Kaoru,

I've seen your work too... your a progressive learner might I add. thank you.

Sunnyone,

Nice to see you got out of Camelot for a minute. You surprize me, haven't you been here as long as I..? Thanks so much.

Midnitesun,

No doubt Martie and Nan will..! They read everything you know... Even if they don't always say so...

Janette,

Thank you so much too, you are all so wonderful. It's nice when someone drops a line and says so.

love all, dale

[This message has been edited by lucky (08-24-2003 02:43 PM).]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-08-24 10:16 PM

lucky/Dale

We walk the same path so many times....and it leads to the photo album, which leads to the memory, which brings it back like it was real...and is with your words. Hugs as always to you and Rg, for being part of the life I have with those memories. You are both so special to me!

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

7 posted 2003-08-25 12:25 PM

What exquisite sorrow some tender memories bring! What careful craft you use in bringing them to light. A great gift you have, my dearest.

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