Open Poetry #28 |
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Who am I fooling? |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I poured myself another shot of redemption and thought This time I'll get it right though in truth I actually heard the echo of my lies |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Well, I'd copy my favorite parts, but the whole thing is great. REally enjoyed this, I'm saving it. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
can't get away from yourself, huh? switch the drink |
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Janette![]()
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"I actually heard the echo of my lies" Now there's a powerful statement ... Gulp! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jason, aha love the first stanza . . . actually you are one up on yourself here . . . insight, m'friend xxoo |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Not fooling me -- I see that you have very clear eyes, and that the real redemption was in pouring two fingers of insightful writing for the rest of us to drink.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
SUch insight in your words I see.You truly are a talented poet my friend ![]() Crystal |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Swift concise well done |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Jason youre brilliant..one of the sites best so of course i knew to look to the last few pages and smallest number of replies to find you..I know its not about replies but i wish you'd get the recognition you deserve |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Kaora, Thank you, I think "saving it" is the highest praise one can get on PIP Michelle, I know I drive you insane with the self abusive writes ![]() Thank you Janette, The worst lies we tell, are to ourselves Sue, Thank you ![]() Ed, Thanks for sharing the drink. Crystal, Thank you for the compliment and for reading. Karilea, Thank you for the kind words and the read. Raph, I do appreciate every reply I get, and truly, I have some great people that never miss a write(even my terrible ones)I think my blunt, self abusing style are a turn off for some. You have supported me since the beginning, and that was some high praise.Thank you. I love this place, thanks guys. Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
seeing that it is free , of course *smile* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Well, no matter how much you try, some things just won't be drowned out!! What a great message this carries......~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Jason - true sometimes is better... BC |
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