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SharaRose
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0 posted 2003-08-23 11:29 AM





~How~

does it happen?


~What~

makes a person so blind?
Not able to see the good
not looking to believe
someone could
be kind.

~Why~

Asking
why someone would?

~Where,~

does it come from?

~When~

a person
suspects all
done for them.

~Who~

wants it all to be wrong?
And for everything
to be
something
to question?


Who,
what,
where,
when,

and
why
...cry...?

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-08-23 11:33 AM


wish I knew the answers...
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-08-23 12:28 PM


SharaRose
Interesting enjoyed the read.

The Virgil
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3 posted 2003-08-23 02:31 PM



You ask some interesting questions.  I like this.


SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-08-23 03:08 PM


Nakdthoughts- Thanks, me, too. Thanks for reading.

Seymour- Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed. Your comment means alot to me.

The Virgil- Hi Virgil. I've never seen you before. Thank you for the comment. I am glad you liked.

to you all,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

bklynboy
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5 posted 2003-08-23 06:04 PM


Enjoyed and interesting
SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-08-23 10:30 PM


Thank you bklnboy...I am glad you enjoyed.


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-08-24 09:16 AM


Goodness you have jumbled my brain
with so many unanswered questions lol

but, why cry?  I guess if we didnt
one day we would spontaneously combust
or have permanent residence in a room
with carpeting on the walls
*smile*
nice write Shara
xxoo  

Patricia
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8 posted 2003-08-24 10:25 AM


SharaRose,
Good questions for which I have no answers. You left me with words to ponder.  Good job!  I like to think...except when my brain hurts.  LOL

Patricia  



angelblueyes
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9 posted 2003-08-24 10:28 AM


Much enjoyed here.You gave me some things to think about today It always needs some stimulation.Very well done
Crystal

Bonnie j
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10 posted 2003-08-24 11:16 AM


Enjoyed this one. Puts all kinds of ideas in my head. How this could be written with different questions. Cool
Bon-Bon

SharaRose
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11 posted 2003-08-27 11:08 PM


Hi Little Wings-- well when I said why cry..it's because this write was about someone that wouln't care anyway, so it seems to not matter. Why, cry?

Patricia...that's a cute one..when your brain hurts...hehehe...maybe I can write a funny one sometimes to make it tickle. I know me!

Angelblueeyes-- Thanks. I'm glad this stimulated some thoughts for you. Just thinking about these things regarding a person I know.

Bonnie J-- I am glad you felt this was cool. Thanks for that.


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

passing shadows
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12 posted 2003-08-29 04:59 AM


I sure did need this! thank you
Kaoru
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13 posted 2003-08-29 07:17 AM


Asking is a form of knowing..

wanting to know.. is passion.

Wonderful write,

the answers may be inside the questions.

SharaRose
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14 posted 2003-08-31 08:06 PM


passing shadow --thank you.. I needed your words. I am glad this was a good thing for you to read.

Kaoru-- The not knowing is cruel when withheld purposely. You are right about the answers being in the questions. I read my own words again and I think it's because the person doesn't care about the right thing to do. So why get involved with an answer.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

green_itchy_stuff
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15 posted 2003-09-01 01:01 PM


Good poem.  I guess if your asking, the answers depend on the person being asked.  This is a very kind poem.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Susan Caldwell
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16 posted 2003-09-01 01:56 PM


Some questions never get answered until the person being asked finally understands why they are being asked...

Excellent writing..and pondering.

Susan

vandana
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17 posted 2003-09-01 06:23 PM


enjoyed
SharaRose
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18 posted 2003-09-01 09:35 PM


Thank you to all of you. I appreciate you took the time to read, and comment...

Itchy-- It was meant for kindness, because when I wrote this I was sad in wondering why it has to be this way. :'(

Susan Caldwell-- I think you must be right.
Thanks for your words of critique'...all of you are such wonderful writers.

Vandana--Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed.



to you all,
SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-01-2003 09:38 PM).]

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