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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2003-08-22 05:19 PM

{Joint post between Cpat Hair & Tiers}

You saw
Falling leaves in
gentle cascade of
inevitability

A gradual fading
into grey hanging
damply over already
chilled shoulders

I saw
Budding possibilities
Patiently awaiting
transformation into
Exotic bloom
given time and tended

Perhaps you do not see
blossoms wilt and turn to seed
but see them wither
caring not to stay
or pluck them harshly
when beauty fades

I wonder do you reap
those words you sow
or have you ignored too long
the beauty of change
the time it takes

to grow

These fields,
Cultivated long ago
And watered sparingly
with Tiers still beg
deluge of mouth over
mouth to feed the drought

Nourish me

Season have not changed
Only our own weather
worn perspectives...

~The Captain & Tiersdin

Thank you, Ron!

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (08-22-2003 05:20 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-08-22 06:52 PM

Tier & Ron...I am speechless...
This is exquisite!!
I pray we see more from you two!
~Thank you and hugs to you both~

Back to the top where you belong.

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-08-22 08:05 PM

Utterly amazing duet!! Going into my library for sure. Congrats you two. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 2003-08-27 12:23 PM

This is an awesome duet, both of you should take a bow, for together you've created a masterpiece. Thanks for sharing this here with us.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-08-27 01:06 PM

Good God, what a palette placed before me
Ron and Tier - this is beautiful
I adore the wordplay there and it reminded me of the cycle of life and the seasons:

These fields,
Cultivated long ago
And watered sparingly
with Tiers still beg
deluge of mouth over
mouth to feed the drought

Nourish me

Season have not changed
Only our own weather
worn perspectives...

absolutely stunning the both of you
*bow now gracefully*
*smile*
xxoo

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

5 posted 2003-08-27 01:12 PM

Nice!

Reads well!

[This message has been edited by wandering glider (08-27-2003 07:11 PM).]

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

6 posted 2003-08-27 04:46 PM

I am also speechless, stunning.

Jason

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2003-08-27 09:47 PM

Thank you, everyone for your inspiring comments!

Much love to you all,

~Tiers

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

8 posted 2003-08-27 10:20 PM

my mother had this album
but I dont remember this song from it
I looked at the liner notes
hmmmm

OH!....its not Tenielle!

sorry my mistake

course that was bad.....
but this...
this was lovely
Tier?
you sing so well
with that barbershop trio
of WranxSquirrelCaptain

more please...

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

9 posted 2003-08-27 10:33 PM

WOW!!!You two leave me breathless.A perfect pair come together to bring life to the page

Crystal

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

10 posted 2003-08-27 10:37 PM

Hiya Tier, Hiya Ron

I missed this, but am happy that someone dug it up for me.

I've never written with Mr.Hair, but have duetted with Tier, so I can imagine how this went.

And it reads as I would expect. Lovely

Ed

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

11 posted 2003-08-27 11:43 PM

Where have you been?

Loving this...especially the part about when beauty fades.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2003-08-28 06:46 AM

Tier...Ron...this is beautiful. I had missed it, but it returned...thank goodness.

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Thank you, Ron! [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (08-22-2003 05:20 PM).]

Thank you, Ron!

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