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lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2003-08-04 02:02 AM

sometimes

sometimes your flurry
echoes for hours on my skin
before I tuck you gently back
in a pocket of my brain but
this time of year is jaded
with the sodden
weight of
loss
‘til I
spill
my lonely
solitaire on another

April dawn

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-08-04 02:06 AM

When I read this it made me think of the old song "Love the one you're with" from the 70's. Wow..that brought back memories. Thanks for sharing.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-08-04 02:10 AM

mmm, sad and lonely even when not alone. Like the words and the write and the picturesque form, but especially the feelings. Thanks. ~K~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-08-04 05:15 AM

excellent write, love the form

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-08-04 10:10 AM

It's the greatest pain there is, and the longest lasting agony. I've never known someone who carried it, that didn't bear it forever. I'm glad you're able to say it, express it in this way, and I hope the saying gives you a measure of peace.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-08-04 10:22 AM

LuckyMyFriend~
You write the tenderest memories ever~
So VERY, VERY good to see you here~
Hello to Rosemary~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

6 posted 2003-08-04 11:00 AM

thank you all so much, April Dawn still means so much to me...

pouring loneliness
over the empty threshold
that dawning April

dale

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-08-04 11:01 AM

lucky...it is good to see you posting..I've missed you and your poetry. I wish I didn't understand so well, that to love, is to feel the pain of seperation.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

8 posted 2003-08-04 11:02 AM

Great write and loved the form.
angelblueyes

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

9 posted 2003-08-06 01:47 PM

I love you, and your love for our lost baby. You write with such yearning, from your deepest heart. Each time you write of her, my heart leans toward yours.

.

The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2003-08-06 01:57 PM

Susan C.

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