Open Poetry #28 |
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She's Saying Goodbye To Manhattan |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows ![]() |
rooftop with the stars folding chair sixteen flights up tears and iced champagne ©2003 by icebox |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*sigh*.. i got this image in my head.. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Celestial breeze Depurates maculate mind Space for future's cast |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Ice, there's nothing you can't do.WOW!!!! Crystal |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I use to do something similar... The image is clear.. Susan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox A rooftop in San Francisco held similar moments for me. You convey so much with so few words...I admire this ability of yours. |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This one rates a "Wow," and a trip to the library....I want to keep it as an example to myself of just how strong this form can be. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! My favorite form presented expertly! ![]() into my library |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we all need those kinds of goodbyes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very real, Icebox... very. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Kaoru ~ It is not a bad image, is it? Nan ~ I never thought of a departure as a stain. I have to reflect on that., thanks. angelblueyes ~ Oh...there are lots of things I can't do. *smile* Susan Caldwell ~ Yes, there are times when a private peace must be made inside one's self. Martie ~ I am pleased that you liked this. Thank you for telling me. Ratleader ~ Thank you. I am glad you like it. Midnitesun ~ Thanks, I value your opinion greatly. passing shadows ~ It is true! I thought you might understand. Sunshine ~ Thank you; you are right in seeing that. I am glad. |
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