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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-08-22 12:32 PM



rooftop with the stars
folding chair sixteen flights up
tears and iced champagne

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-22 01:14 AM


*sigh*..

i got this image in my head..

Nan
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2 posted 2003-08-22 08:11 AM


Celestial breeze
Depurates maculate mind
Space for future's cast

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-08-22 09:36 AM


Ice, there's nothing you can't do.WOW!!!!
Crystal

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2003-08-22 10:25 AM


I use to do something similar...

The image is clear..

Susan

Martie
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5 posted 2003-08-22 10:32 AM


icebox

A rooftop in San Francisco held similar moments for me.  You convey so much with so few words...I admire this ability of yours.

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6 posted 2003-08-22 10:35 AM


This one rates a "Wow," and a trip to the library....I want to keep it as an example to myself of just how strong this form can be.

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Gaia
7 posted 2003-08-22 01:02 PM




BRAVO!
My favorite form
presented expertly!


into my library

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-08-22 02:01 PM


we all need those kinds of goodbyes
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9 posted 2003-08-22 02:02 PM



Very real, Icebox...
very.

icebox
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in the shadows
10 posted 2003-08-22 03:42 PM


Kaoru ~ It is not a bad image, is it?

Nan ~ I never thought of a departure as a stain.  I have to reflect on that., thanks.

angelblueyes ~ Oh...there are lots of things I can't do. *smile*

Susan Caldwell ~ Yes, there are times when a private peace must be made inside one's self.

Martie ~ I am pleased that you liked this.  Thank you for telling me.

Ratleader ~ Thank you.  I am glad you like it.

Midnitesun ~ Thanks, I value your opinion greatly.

passing shadows ~ It is true!  I thought you might understand.

Sunshine ~ Thank you; you are right in seeing that.  I am glad.

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