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Open Poetry #28

Chain (meg's challenge)

gringakiwi
Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

0 posted 2003-08-21 07:57 PM

A chain
silver
heart locket
worn with love
for so many nights
cradling my neck
reminding me of love's truth
until
he left
with Laura
and the chain
that I loved
found a watery grave
at midnight
under my tears
at the bottom
of the
sea.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-08-21 08:04 PM

Oh Jesus Connie . . .
this is an awesome write
the content, I am sorry
but one brilliant perfect write
well met indeed
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-08-21 08:23 PM

You know...the ex's wedding ring is somewhere in the NY sewage system...

Very good write and great pic!

Susan

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-08-21 09:18 PM

Exceptionally written and well met.
Crystal

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-08-21 09:44 PM

Beautiful..but very sad. Well met, love.

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