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Open Poetry #28

Very Little Bits

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-08-21 10:12 AM

Very Little Bits

It is very "trying"
when all you counted on
is gone.

Yesterday, I was
dripping from the exertion
and the memories
that chased me down.

Today's words leave
an absence of taste
for tomorrow.

It gets easier
as each day goes by
and the "I told you so"
becomes true...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-08-21 10:43 AM

a Very Big good from me...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-08-21 10:47 AM

Maureen,
A sad poem but a good write.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

3 posted 2003-08-21 10:48 AM

nice write

Martie

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California

4 posted 2003-08-21 10:50 AM

Maureen

Time is sometimes a bandaid.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-08-21 10:54 AM

"It gets easier
as each day goes by
and the "I told you so"
becomes true..."

--Indeed!--and thank goodness!

~ Here's to great todays and even better tomorrows!

EA

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2003-08-21 10:55 AM

Martie, a bandaid will never be big enough.

Karilea...little, big...some days they all seem the same to me

Probably, Sy each of my poems is really sad...even those that seemed happy
because truthfully my life is a lie...I just have learned to pretend well.

Thank you vandana...

M

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-08-21 11:16 AM

nakdthoughts - and as each day passes, the real becomes only memories, my best to you as always...

BC

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

8 posted 2003-08-21 11:25 AM

Yeppers what everyone else said..
good write
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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