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Open Poetry #28

Valley of my Heart

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-08-19 05:23 PM

You have become a permanent
resident in the valley of my heart

my pulse throbs with thrusting
vibrations when my eyes focus
on your graceful physique as you
enter into my dimension

thoughts of you succumb me into
daydreams of ecstasy ~ ~ vibrations
of your voice softly plays a melody
to my ears

you have my senses in a dazzle
and my thoughts frazzled beyond
a fool's paradise every time you're
near

do you feel me~?

[This message has been edited by QjQ (08-19-2003 07:44 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-08-19 11:26 PM

Now I could feel the love. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-08-19 11:34 PM

QjQ - I would say if she doesn't feel after reading this romantic write, she'll never get it...

BC

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-08-21 11:26 AM

Very fine write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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