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Clarity ( Kaoru's Challenge)
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Clarity ( Kaoru's Challenge) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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She stands solitaire flawless size seven a minute reflection of me, I see the sun, glinting off of a wave Far, far away . . . another time and place Melded gold two lives unfold when I fight the need for sleep she is there for me Keeper of my dreams . . . -------------------------------------------------- /pip/Forum7/HTML/000583.html [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-20-2003 11:44 PM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Gawd, where do you get these beautiful, flowing words from? send me some? and some clarity?  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue...very very lovely indeed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*tosses her pen into the garbage disposal* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I love this...into the library... ~K~ |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I have so much to learn... insanity is not a crime |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - geez, the words get better and better... BC |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ooh, this is very good.. I love your writes, consistantly. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue- one of these days, you are going to have to give me writing lessons. Another great job. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem . . . you have your own river flowing quite nicely there and the clarity? If I pass mine to you . . . you will be reallly confused . . . thank you Thank you Nancy - always nice to see you smiling at me Kris? Please be careful when reaching in while you grab that pen, OK? Thank you Kahlil - thank you - what a compliment! Liz, it never ends . . . the learning thank you Bill - you are so sweet! God, thank you so much Meg, thank you and thank you for this challenge . . . sparked me to write of something I truly hold dear to my heart Brad, guitar lessons? fair trade? (that was ridiculous, you need no lessons, but was very sweet of you) Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-20-2003 11:41 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Your flow. your words, and your heart are as smooth as the satin thjat blows in the wind Crystal |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...and now I think this is incredible, so, "bump".... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh god..thank you for that "Flawless size seven" comment...lol... Loved it, love you, love your thoughts, love your words. Susan |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
angel . . . my God what a beautiful reply. Your words calmed me there thank you Kahlil - ahaha yes sssshhh only you and I know lol thank you again Thank you so much V! Susan - WOW - coming from you that means a lot to me, for you are a true poetess thank you Thanks guys xxoo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I had to come back to explain that in this challenge, I was describing my wedding ring . . . just in case you guys were wondering . . . |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, the light is where I found clarity, and I guess why I call myself Mistletoe Angel is because I believe Christmas should be celebrated everyday as it is both a beautiful spiritual day to celebrate God and Jesus and the love of one another, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Splendid writing...as always! Us three ladies need to get together and get busy on that duo-plus one! Great write Sue! Tima |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Great job, Sue. Keep that imagination growing - we've had so many good poems from your pen! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling, and thinking this is one of your best, Sue. From a not-so-flawless size 10.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I just went back and read your comment about the ring. No, 10 isn't my ring size.  |
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Suede Junior Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 38Drifting on the soul |
I cannot begin to search for a word which describes the heart of such a poetic soul, to be lost in this poem would be great, amazing!! Thank you for writing this As forever is always - Suede |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
thank you Noah, what a beautiful response! Thank you Tima , ohh what an interesting write that will be Ben, as from yours thank you so much, you are so kind Kacy, LMAO - everyone thought I meant myself, Good God! LMFAO thank you Suede . . . Welcome! you are much to kind Thanks guys xxoo |
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