On A Date (people watching challenge)

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Open Poetry #28

On A Date (people watching challenge)

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-08-20 07:34 PM

On A Date

By her closet she stands
As she readies for her date
She doesn’t know what to wear
And she doesn’t want to be late
On her bed a pile of clothes
None of them felt right
And the way she looks and feels
Will make or ruin the night
Finally a dress
That looks and feels good
It clings to her body
The way a dress should
With shoes to match
And purse in hand
She looks in the mirror a final time
Everything’s perfect
And the date begins
With a stroll on the boardwalk
Walking hand in hand
Watching the birds fly across
The setting sun
The drive to dinner is quiet
Except for the soft music on the radio
The restaurant is her choice
With an ambiance and atmosphere
She will enjoy
The ride home, with no words said
The gleam in her eyes
Say the first part of the evening
Was excellent
And she is ready for dessert
But that’s another story

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-08-20 10:25 PM

You are very talented. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-08-20 11:27 PM

This is good.Well met.
Crystal

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