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Open Poetry #28

Your Name in Water

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2003-08-20 02:56 PM

I plan to travel to the ocean
and write your name in water
till favored currents round you bathe
the swells of my desire

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-08-20 02:57 PM

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-08-20 06:47 PM

Oooh myyyyy....

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-08-21 02:08 PM

Love the ripple effect Robert Frazier.

This absolutely shimmers!!!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-08-21 02:11 PM

My goodness gracious!!

I am keeping this one! Wonderful, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

5 posted 2003-08-21 02:15 PM

Good stuff!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-08-21 04:06 PM

Robert....This was great!

DarkPoetess
New Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 9
PA, USA

7 posted 2003-08-21 04:56 PM

Oooooooh, preeeeetty! Can I read it one more time? LOL

Smoochies to all,
~Dark Poetess~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

8 posted 2003-08-22 08:47 PM

Wow, this is HOT!!! I could see it and feel it, and it's going into my library. Thank you! ~K~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

9 posted 2003-08-22 10:55 PM

click

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

10 posted 2003-08-22 11:38 PM

terrific,,,

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

11 posted 2003-08-23 07:38 PM

Oh mannnnnnnnn ... she has got to love this one, I know I do.

Great write here Robert.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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