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Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-08-20 11:54 AM

Oceans

She was speaking of oceans to all that would hear
The beauty of the ocean with her cool Caribbean breezes
Her coolness, touching the shore, her beauty
of burning crystal, the color of sapphire blue or of the freezing
color
of aquamarine.

The beauty of the oceans of the desert, its waves of foam
rolling across its heated banks of dryness
In this heated dryness, an oasis, a cooling sanctuary of
lush cooling colors of green and life giving water, the color of blue.

The beauty of the oceans of the forest
A rolling surf of green, tumbling over reefs of evergreen
In the middle of this beauty a waterfall or a cool sparking
stream of fascination, the color of nature.

The beauty of the oceans of life are an endless mystery of
fascinating adventures
We crash upon the pounding reefs of life trying to survive
Or
We calmly flow upon the shores of life with only love held within
our hearts
The colors of life are an indescribable mirage of fascination
Yellow for sun filled days of love and laughter
Red for when we are being fiery with anger or filled with loving
passion
Blue for tranquility or deep sadness
Colors of peach, beige, powder blue, or the delicate shades of
candle light
soothing your weary soul
Our life rippling over the sands of time thirsting for knowledge
Just like the desert, our oasis is the bible leading us to everlasting
life.
Come my precious children
Enjoy the oceans of life.

Love Bon-Bon

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

1 posted 2003-08-20 12:57 PM

The analogy works well. Also, when describing the ocean as you eloquently did, it reminded me of what I personaly seen when on vacation in the western Caribbean.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-08-20 01:19 PM

Bonnie,
Well done, enjoyed the read very much.

Jordyn05
Member

since 2003-07-17

Posts 62

3 posted 2003-08-20 01:26 PM

Bonnie,

Super poem. It is well written. Keep on posting.

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

4 posted 2003-08-21 01:46 AM

A treasured gift of oceans and
all other Heavenly gifts. We've
far more to enjoy then to complain
about!

Excellent write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-08-22 01:43 AM

of burning crystal, the color of sapphire blue or of the freezing
color
of aquamarine.

You brought the colors to life,
and painted them pretty.

So Beautifully~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2003-08-22 11:31 AM

there are no words to describe the beauty of this poem, yet, by it I'm so enriched, rejuvinated....thank you dear lady...for writeing and sharing.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-08-22 12:01 PM

This is lovely.The imagery, the colors, and the flow make this a beautiful read.
Crystal

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