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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-08-19 10:36 AM

We speak from the distance
of our boundries.

With words that only carry
so far.

Perhaps we never hear beyond
their mere reflection?

So we draw the echos close.

And listen...as if they were
a whisper.

Imagining we weren't so
far away.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-08-19 10:42 AM

so, does that mean when my ears are ringing he's thinking of me?????

Lovely poem....very much enjoyed the smooth caress of this....good jobber!

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-08-19 10:46 AM

Whoever youre whispering to...your moca perhaps? She can hear you, not in sound, but in soul.

Your thoughts, always make me think!

Beautiful write m friend.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-08-19 10:53 AM

Dear Gem,
We whisper always to our "deeper selves"...no matter the outer form it takes.
Sometimes my soul hears me best through whispered words to Moca. And sometimes through the eyes of a stranger.
And sometimes Gem...quiet often...through your beautiful words.

Love,
Eric

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2003-08-19 11:45 AM

Enjoyed reading these words...

~Tier

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-08-19 11:54 AM

And listen...as if they were
a whisper.

Imagining we weren't so
far away.

Eric, this is so true when I'm apart
from my Honey-love. A very good poem.
Hugs

Ethel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-08-19 12:05 PM

Beautiful as always Eric...
Much enjoyed....the whisper.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2003-08-20 03:07 AM

Beautiful, Eric! You surely know how to shorten the distances ...
Echoes whispering while travelling at light-speed!
I love you, Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-08-20 03:45 AM

you always get me thinking

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2003-08-21 01:46 PM

Instead of highlighting your entire poem,
I will just say that you make me believe
that there is magic in words, even from a distance.

I really loved this!!!

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

10 posted 2003-08-21 10:30 PM

I do enjoy the voice and style of your poetry.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

aran
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since 2003-05-18

Posts 34

11 posted 2003-08-21 11:02 PM

Enough, yet not too much. This is the type of poetry that makes the reader think beyond the words in a near transcendence.

Very nicely done.

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2003-08-22 11:24 AM

Wish I'd written this -- then I could enjoy it from the inside too.... I'm keeping this one!

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angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

13 posted 2003-08-22 12:09 PM

I enjoy the sound of this.I'm sure she can hear you in your spirit and soul.
Crystal

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