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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-08-19 09:48 PM



From a yonder shore
trade winds
and tides
have brought this mystery
to my presence
as i sit gazing out
into the vastness of the sea
I hold
this mystery in my hands
with my thoughts
wondering where has it
come from
and whom else has
touched it leaves me wondering.
could it have been you?
and if so
then now we have touched




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1 posted 2003-08-19 09:57 PM


Enjoyed this Glenn...
Reminded me of that old song..."Where or When".
Oh! Now that song is going to be in my head all night!! LOL!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-08-19 10:59 PM


yes, good assessment here
under one moon, we are all brothers, and sisters

JilGirl
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3 posted 2003-08-21 11:27 AM


Much enjoyed!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-08-21 11:56 AM


QjQ~
Just lovely~

I felt the ocean running through it~
Sands adrift from shore to shore~
Washing another's thoughts to the beaches of a waiting heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-08-21 01:36 PM


oooooooo...

oh yes, now this is beautiful!

kaleanna
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6 posted 2003-08-21 02:53 PM


enjoyed your poem

Meesh

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-08-21 03:10 PM


--indeed we have!--and in the purest of ways!


EA

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8 posted 2003-08-21 04:38 PM


enjoyed this
gringakiwi
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9 posted 2003-08-21 07:43 PM


And again your poetry stirs up a smile in me. This is my favourite one, QJQ.
angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-08-21 09:37 PM


Your words stir from within and resonate a beautiful sound.
Crystal

Saunni
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11 posted 2003-08-21 10:43 PM


Outstanding write, I just have to say! I was like... goodness... that is just beautiful. I can't even put it into words. Sincerely, Sauni.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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