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Beauty Man
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Beauty Man |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
parts of me scattered, throughout infinity how i've struggled to know the whole of me searching for anything i can discern opening new while acknowledging learned there must be some kind of wisdom here i'm not a beauty queen, never aspired to such though thought i'd some measure of elegance and yes, what if that's my calling card no concern to figure the whole of me but to wear my experience well do you know? have i told you? you've probably guessed that to me you're the picture of elegance yes, yes, you wear it so well weathering the eons that have cast their spell upon you, My Beauty Man |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 enjoyed this write immensely |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Whether you are "beautiful" on the outside, matters not to me--for you certainly are beautiful where it counts!---on the inside!---and on the blue pages!  A marvellous write! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you Midnitesun and Earth Angel. I try to find the beauty in everyone...sometimes it's a struggle to find it in myself, but in THAT man, no problem! And he returns it to me, so, so... Have you looked at the moon tonight? |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
hey kahlil, i havent seen you in a while, i really enjoyed this peice, it speaks to me as I have a hard time excepting myself...I will for sure be back to read more ~Talia |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thanks Talia, it was a nice surprise to find your message this a.m. I've been in a slump with my writing lately, I hope it's over soon! Take care. ~K~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...I wish I had written this... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gawd..this is SO good!!  ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"parts of me scattered, throughout infinity how i've struggled to know the whole of me" this is deeply beautiful, and intimate. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Sunshine, Enchantress, and Robert: Thank you so much, I am deeply honored. Maybe I can climb out of that slump now! ~K~ |
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