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Toss me a cigarette |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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these birds are psychotic, they break thru my dreams and cry with daylight, in 2 more moonfuls,they'll abandon me again, like springtime lovers laced in pink leaves, crumbling in autumn bonfires, the window will be songless, painted in white, without expression, summer squeaks out its last brushstroke in a masterpiece of cornfields, i want to make love in them, under the towers of green, laying before god, i am reborn again, i was awoken, trees lost definition, and became waterfalls of green to me, toss me a cigarette, * i need another life, its 5 am "whats the pen for", he asks me, and offers a tool of his own instead, i'm afraid to be dead again does anyone understand this? i'll take these morsels as they gather above my simmering dreams, they are scattered crumbs laced with metaphors, the birds grace me with them for now, if i dont claim them, they'll become lost luggage, the wind may may carry them instead, and give them to the pretty englishgirl, this is poetric shangrila right now, and i'm living the starring role. *** - kudos to simon and garfunkel, two queens boys [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-02-2003 11:11 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - your words become more and more expressive in your writings. Actually each one is more you. "i'm afraid to be dead again does anyone understand this?" Yes, I understand this perfectly... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Toss me a beer..nice word mishy and thanks for the email i know what you meant no worries just my usual self depreciation |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are very much alive, passionately alive! summer squeaks out its last brushstroke in a masterpiece of cornfields, i want to make love in them, under the towers of green, laying before god, Excellent and soo beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very nice Michele, and full of passion.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, this is really sensual... I like it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
I can only echo what the other have said. I enjoyed this but then again I enjoy most of your stuff,,,,,dont want to stroke your ego by saying all your stuff,,,,, |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Another great write Michelle.Enjoyed, as always. Jason |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Echo... Enjoyed very much. Here's to Queens (even if they are not from the city  )SG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! I've watched you progress Michele, you're moving on up! awesome stunning writes lately! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"toss me a cigarette, * i need another life, its 5 am "whats the pen for", he asks me, and offers a tool of his own instead," WOW I must echo what has been said previously ... you are rockin Lady ... keep on writing! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
When the words do come you have to capture them. I know I haven't been here long, but since i've been here I have enjoyed every one of yours I have read. I have been moved each time to comment. Always a treat!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele, please listen to this: "NY State of Mind" Billy Joel you need it This is blinding . . . truly Miss Inked xxoo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
damn girl..you have written something memorable. Library. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
they break thru my dreams and cry with daylight, in 2 more moonfuls,they'll abandon me again, Your pen is on fire girlie~ I really loved this Michele~ |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
good tribute to my buds.....Paul and Artie |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
in a masterpiece of cornfields, i want to make love in them sure beets rice fields... sorry lol great write here Michele sorry I havent been in here lately |
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PassionandFun Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 60 |
Vintage you.... Jeff |
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MoniDaPoet Member
since 2003-08-14
Posts 73California, USA |
There's nothing like a great read to inspire any human who reads it! Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I have to save this. It kicked my ass right out from under me I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrifically written,,, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"summer squeaks out its last brushstroke in a masterpiece of cornfields, i want to make love in them, under the towers of green, laying before god, i am reborn again, i was awoken, trees lost definition, and became waterfalls of green to me," --Yes! Yes! Yes!  EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...damn! Glad I didn't miss this treasure! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for the feedback, and thanks paul and artie for the inspiration on the l972 greyhouund bus looking for amerika |
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