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Arietta |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Arietta By: Noah Eaton 7/29/03 . . . . . . . . ...across Green Street from Murphy's Pub... . . . ...in the front of an art gallery... . . . ...an elderly woman says to me... . . . . . . . . . ...she knew an artist in her gallery... . . . ...who had small feet and skin of parchment... . . . ...so white that when he enjoyed a drink... . . . ...you could see his cheeks and nose... . . . . . ...glow an autumn red... . . . ...that would shine a whole November through... . . . . . . . . . . ...and he died one March evening... . . . ...while counting the riches on his dining table... . . . ...with a smile wider than you could ever see.... . . ...just comes to show you... . . . . . . ...scattering is easier than gathering... . . . . . . . . . . . . ...so, my child... . . . . . ...be there with the day... . . . . . ...and be gone... . . . . . ...with the day... . . . . . ...so sow early and mow early... . . . . . . . . . . . . . I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-17-2003 08:01 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very interesting write Noah. But I really like it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
What a charming tale to share with us ... I adored it. Thank you Noah. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Very different write from you; but I enjoyed it. Your writing talent is immense. I don't believe I have ever seen anything but quality writing from you. ***Ivy Rose |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Evening, Dear Noah! Another treat for us to enjoy from your bottomless well of talent! Interesting presentation and wonderful mots of wisdom!  Linda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow Noah...awesome write! Eric |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
so I see Ireland has inspired you!? this I must confess is one of my favourites...I'm green with envy see  lol urrhh...I'm teasing..just being silly that's all  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, I'm loving opening your poem on here. This is such a good poem, Lady.  Hugs  Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely Noah... M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Noah, these lines so distant give a very original rhythm to this beautiful poem, holding much wisdom! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
sow early and mow early Great advice from your elderly lady. Enjoyed your poem muchly Noah  Maree. fate is not just |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow!! A different style for you Noah... and very much enjoyed. Good to have you back my sidekick!! ~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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