Open Poetry #28 |
Versatile Violin |
symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
Oh the geniuses who invented Who invented this beautiful instrument That can take you away, like a book To a far off distant place Where your inner and outer worries are displaced Where time is no more Where life will stop in its tracks Pausing for all eternity Versatile Violin Play me your music that I adore Filling Me Inspiring me to do more with my life Driving evil thoughts out of my skull Play that song that makes my spine chill Play that song that makes my hair rise Play that song that takes me away Away out of the way of my mind Towards the back where everything is organized And there are no worries, nor problems The strings are god-like in nature So simplistic as a wood chasis and metal strings But so complex a nature in the sound Oh the geniuses who invented Who invented this beautiful instrument That can take you away, like a book To a far off distant place Where your inner and outer worries are displaced Where time is no more Where life will stop in its tracks Pausing for all eternity |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...my favorite is the cello...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Play that song that makes my spine chill Play that song that makes my hair rise Play that song that takes me away Away out of the way of my mind ****************************************** BRAVO! a delightful write WELCOME! you've played a lovely tune with this piece. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I love violin music. My son used to play it. I do miss it alot. Such beautiful music it gives to the soul!!! Thanks for reminding of the beauty that instrument brings!!! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
The violin somehow strikes every chord of my emotion. Thank you for sharing this beautiful write. ~K~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Brava, this works well as long as it's not me playing. When it's me 'catgut' takes on a new meaning lol. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have a violin poem somewhere... so I know the feeling you have conveyed so well. Thank you! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I have always loved music (was a DJ in another life)...but have absolutely no talent what so ever...can't even carry a tune... But oh I could sit and listen to others forever...playing anything..doesn't matter...oh now I want to go hang at a jazz bar... Nice piece! Susan |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
bumping this tune to the top of today's chart |
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