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Open Poetry #28

When WE Sing

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-08-18 02:23 PM

Verse unfolding upon the canvases of consenting hearts
Charms this sprinkle of freshened flowers
Magic spins in the eyes of delight
When we sing, when we sing….
Sending millions of colors on wing
We form an internal spoken crystalline
Sounds emit forward showering sun beams
We submerge through the eternity of time and space
Inclining on grace, tasting power & nature’s glowing place
What care or greater price might a body store?
Swelling within countenance, we suppose sunshine and little things
Like a serenade gazes from a lover’s eyes
We drink life, from a buttercup, impetuously pouring
Sweet fragrance from the nodding air, golden keys unlocking
Candle light….oh how eternal, how daring this surrounding sea
Foaming a muse of elaborate June, in our own language
And blind sounding energy is of a sapphire’s likeness
As “Life” brings down this nightly caress, embracing mirth
Oh the music, the charm, rich and content
When we sing, when we sing….

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-08-18 02:49 PM

excellent write,,,

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-08-18 02:52 PM

I liked this alot. I also enjoy singing--and I can feel physical change happening inside at times--it's a wonderful feeling that I can't quite describe...

Your poem reminded me of that.

Thanks.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-08-18 03:23 PM

Lovely, Lee..

Inspiring..

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-08-18 04:41 PM

Oh this is very very touching and beautiful dear Lee!
.. when we sing! Blessed time!
Love, Margherita

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