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Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-17 11:22 PM

Although you are not biologically mine, I love you just the same.
You have showed strength and courage.
You were not the one to blame.
You have given me love.
Although I didn't want to see.
You never gave up.
You have always believed in me.
Even through are worst times.
You have always been there.
You never gave up on me.
Before I just didn't care.
Now I know what you were trying to do.
Just to be a part of my life.
I am thankful that you could be.
Even through all of our strife.
Although I may not have always shown it.
Or a lot less than I should.
I love you more.
Than any daughter could.

[This message has been edited by Tequilia_Sunrise (08-18-2003 12:30 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-08-17 11:24 PM

This is such a sweet poem.

Made me smile.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

2 posted 2003-08-18 10:17 AM

This is far to wise for words... My son, who is in the same position you are, read this, and said there was nothing else that could be added to make it better...
Your Dad is one of the luckiest men in the world to have you love him like this.
Great Job

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-08-18 10:48 AM

a few minor corrections and you would have a perfect poem... Beautifully written and expressed...
M

biologically
believed
our worst times ( not are)
didn't

use the edit button next to the email envelope and you can make the corrections..if you want

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2003-08-18 12:31 PM

Im glad you enjoyed this poem, and thankx nakdthoughts for the advice.

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2004-07-05 02:45 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

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