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In The Doo-Of-Doo
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In The Doo-Of-Doo |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In The Doo-Of-Doo ~*Marge Tindal*~ When stepping in the doo-of-doo don't expect much more than what you will find on the bottom of your own shoe~ Tiptoeing will not help at all for in the pile of dung-da-doo it's STILL what you will find on the bottom of your own shoe~ When the stench is noticed you will smell it first Know what to do ? AVOID stepping in the doo-of-doo and you'll not have to expect much more of what you find clinging to bottom of your own shoe~ *Soooo inspired by a dear true friend* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Now THIS is classic poetry! LOL |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
You are the only one I know that can make me laugh over **** . LOL Love ya, Betty |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Terrific write! And oh soooooo true. Enjoyed. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
LMAO So true this is. I can't stop laughing. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This is such a radical departure from your usual style, I don't know quite what to make of it. Are you speaking literally or otherwise? It's interesting though, that's for sure! Having two dogs, I have experienced the "doo-doo shoe" first hand. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thanks, Dear Marge, for the sound advice!--and now, everytime I see a pile of Doo-Doo---I'll think of You-You! lol  This was cute--just like you! Doo-doo and all! lol lol lol   'n smilie faces,Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-18-2003 01:14 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
LOL...  ...the message comes through clear as a bell...and I thank you |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wise and funny! Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tiptoeing will not help at all for in the pile of dung-da-doo it's STILL what you will find on the bottom of your own shoe~ When the stench is noticed you will smell it first Know what to do ? Yep, I think the best thing to do is to try our best to walk around the "dung-da-doo" and then maybe we won't step in it. And if we don't step in it, maybe it won't get stirred up so much....I've heard that the more dung-doo-doo is stirred up, the more it stinks. Of course this is only my own little opinion...which doesn't mean a whole heck of a lot!! You are such an excellent and talented writer, Marge. I love your poems that you write about your little granddaughter and your poems about your garden and flowers. The pictures you put with your poetry is so beautiful, too. You are a very talented lady, Marge. Hugs to you Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-18-2003 08:08 AM).] |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hmmmmm .... !!!! Huggles |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Did you let those silly dogs out again, Marge? The trick, of course - is to walk them on a leash - and to carry a pooper-scooper with you at all times... Collect the doo-doo in a doo-doo bag and dispense with it appropriately... Then your neighbors won't ever get aggravated with you... After all, keeping a peaceful neighborhood is important, yes??...  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Once again proving that great talent can make even crap sound so good lol. This is a great job. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LOL ! We're gonna make this response a multiple choice ... pick out one you like ... some of you seem to interpret things differently~  1. Oh really ? 2. I am, aren't I ? 3. I did !!! 4. We finally agree on something ? 5. Not really ! 6. It really doesn't, does it ? 7. Only if you're constantly in it ! 8. I LOVE your  9. Do you know how much I LOVE YOU ? (Yep, I know you do !)  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! I'll take a ride on Engine Number 9 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... Yanno how forgettable moments will flash back into your mind? LOL Years ago, I'd invited someone... a male someone I was a bit interested in *G*... over for dinner. He had an unfortunate encounter with a deposit of the stinky variety as he got out of his car... and came stomping into my apartment loudly complaining about his shoe... I would have sympathized... if he hadn't been so completely oblivious to my carpet!!! That interest? LOL It took a BIG dive. *G* |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
All in a day Sis, When you get around to coming over you better bring your rubber galoshes there's alot of doo in my area. We just leave the pooh (I mean boots) at the door... The girls have their own door at the other end of the house and it's they're problem if they step in any doo, which of course they doo. lucky dale |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DixieDoodleGal~ You ARE A CLASSIC ! SuthernGal and Lucky~ I'm booking you both on the same Engine #9 as Dixie's taking !! Lucky~ Now 'why' did I figure you'd make your way to this one ??? LOL ! ... same-old ... same-old ... you've been 'there'~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~It's one of those grin-and-bare days !~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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