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Open Poetry #28

Everafter Extinct

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2003-08-17 01:39 AM

Everafter Extinct

Rapunzel me in daydream pose
for a shining knight, stallion galloped
with strong hands to climb hair sky walls
and Sir Lancelot lips to lick my wounds.

So why did I get my hair cut yesterday?

"Off in the sunset" is overrated
in tomorrow's taunt without remorse
like a white horse bucking the prince
to hang my head tiara bear of diamonds
in apple bitter without the save of sweet.

Poor little pathetic me
I'm the pity princess again,
so perhaps I should join in the laughter?
Who needs happily ever after anyway?
I'm no fool, I'm just well-read
in need of a harlequin fairytale, Danielle Steel style,
definately sans the Fabio.

Deja vu, I'm the butt of cupid's joke
of murphy's law in full force
and good ole fate just loves to grin
for, in the end I always get
the riderless white horse.

Melissa Long-Monette

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

1 posted 2003-08-17 01:49 AM

I really liked this. You wrote it really well. Ouch, though.

...Wow! I haven't read Danielle Steel in...forever!!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-08-17 02:10 AM

I'm taking cupid out..little @*#&$^

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-08-17 09:39 PM

Cute... It'll grow back??

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-08-17 10:06 PM

Oh no...how short?
That's okay...bet you look beautiful just the same.
And, like Nan says ...it will grow back.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

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