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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
I'm stuck inside It's like a trap And in this trap Lies the light That should shine Inside of me But instead, dark's all I see And in this trap Lies a time A time I could have been And in this time I could have been I only turned away Inside I can't resist It slowly seeps away Every ounce of care Fading in decay And every time I look And no one's there to shed The slightest care into my eyes I just break down to the noise Of the failures deep inside Deep inside of me If only I had the chance To turn my back Now here I lay On endless cracks Of the time I try to hide Away from everything inside And only break to what I'm shown And break away where no control Rests in my hands anymore I can't show you what I am But I can promise you That I'm still here |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
The light to follow emanates from the wisdom obtained through mistakes made... no darkness can dampen this light though shadows may temporarily comfort the eyes which burn from this bright revelation... An emotive write you have here -- one to which most of us can relate one way or another... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there is a pattern of light, very soft and profound...coming from the heart and core of all things which are hard...therein lies truth...to focus on each and every day....as if it were a fragile pail of golden sunlight, made just for us....from then comes the most magnificant of miracles...if we could only see...and understand, in order to feel, we've got to experience....if we don't feel...then what is there but poor existence. This poem was amazing... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The internal clock has its own hands of time ... it seems to never end for some and never enough for others. It's always when time is still that we have trouble seeing what others can. Perhaps if we were to break it down just see each crack in itself and build from there maybe then the light can be seen before the end of time. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderful Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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