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Open Poetry #27

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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-06-22 06:12 PM

Would you like to stay
a little longer?

Is there any end
to trailing mourn
if I do?

Where are thoughts
that once belonged here
irreplacable cut glass.

Free fallen spots
of my own self
reside in memory fake.

I have no choice
for sanity's sake
to resaon the wrong.

Climb the rest
and let you off?

Bound by laughters tight bow

open me
and see if i'm what you never wanted.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2003-06-22 06:45 PM

In a word ...

GIFTED!!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-06-22 06:48 PM

brilliant write..very much enjoyed

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-06-22 06:56 PM

I have no choice
for sanity's sake
to resaon the wrong.

Climb the rest
and let you off?

For sanity's sake, how wise your words are.
Sometimes it's not worth the risk to look for the reasons why. Nicely done gemma~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-08-07 03:58 PM

Enjoyed the Write

ARCTIC WIND

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