Open Poetry #27 |
The Path To Happiness |
RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
I walked thought that darkness Searching for myself The memories I hold And dreams to be told My fears grew strong As nightmares rode forth Coming to take me back To the doomed life I walked I took out my sword of strength And killed the enemies within The nightmares faded to dust As I stepped into my happiness |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ At the top of the posting screen, is a list of moderators for this forum. Click on it and send them (I suggest the General Alert group) to move this lovely post to the new Open #27 Forum~ It's too lovely to sit here unread~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! Good write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I took out my sword of strength And killed the enemies within The nightmares faded to dust As I stepped into my happiness To recognize the enemies for what they are and have the strength to extinguish them so that you may enjoy happiness. How wonderful. Liked this piece very much. Patricia |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
As nightmares rode forth..... they do don't they. enjoyed this piece very much. er, can u send me whatever made your nightmares go away? lol. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
hello all you lot that relied Marge Tindal - thanks for getting it moved so these other wonderful poets could read it too and thanks for saying it was good passing shadows - thanks for the comment really makes me feel good knowing people enjoy my work JamesMichael - lol you seem a little nervous but thats ok thanks for the comment Patricia - hey hey glad you put your thoughts into your reply too glad you understand it gemjop - lol to make your dreams go away face then and they will hide from you instand of you hiding from them its that simple glad you enjoyed the poem thanks all hope to write some new poems soon my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good, you kill those inner demons within the human mind and Past ARCTIC WIND |
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