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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2003-06-22 09:12 AM



From softest ember she imbues
Her light in shades of reds and blues
Flickering ‘round the nimble mind
Daring you, her heart to find.

Light that warms, yet doth kill
Fascination at her will
Tame her? There is a doubt
She’s only yours when she is out

Warm your hands on her smile
But beware of her wile
She will woo you closer in
Envelope you within her sin

Saddened then, at her demise
Blackened in her cold dead eyes
Mastery of her passionate ire
Douse you now, this passion’s fire.


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Gaia
1 posted 2003-06-22 09:32 AM


BRAVO! great passionate write, deVine lady.
I don't mind the heat and the burn from this kind of fire.

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2 posted 2003-06-22 01:46 PM


Even after the fire dies, the light still flicker plays in my mind.

Wonderful write. The "blaze" applauds!

Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2003-06-22 01:48 PM


daaaaannnnng!!! love this

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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4 posted 2003-06-22 01:59 PM


PoetD....were you wearing a particular hat
and have a particular witchy friend with
you when you wrote this.  

Excellently done,  let me get my Asbestos,
flame retardant suit....

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-06-22 03:00 PM


Sharon:

this is awesome . . .
an autobiographical write?
hehehe lmao sorry had to
xxoo

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6 posted 2003-06-22 03:09 PM


very seductive and passionately written
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7 posted 2003-06-22 04:04 PM



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8 posted 2003-06-22 05:53 PM


Sharon, this one is


Sure am glad that you reposted it, Lady.  
Hugs to you,  
Ethel

LeeJ
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9 posted 2003-06-22 07:25 PM


good jobber a very good write
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10 posted 2003-06-22 07:37 PM


WOW!!  So pleased I didn't miss this one!
Wonderful write..much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Poet deVine
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11 posted 2003-06-22 07:56 PM


Thank you all!!! Since Arizona seems to be burning down around me I thought I'd repost my 'fire' poem. Sigh. Actually it's no where near me but it's so dry and hot here. This is definitely my last June in Arizona. Definitely!!
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12 posted 2008-08-07 03:59 PM


Fire is such a beautiful Element to the eyes~


ARCTIC WIND

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