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Fire (repost) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
From softest ember she imbues Her light in shades of reds and blues Flickering ‘round the nimble mind Daring you, her heart to find. Light that warms, yet doth kill Fascination at her will Tame her? There is a doubt She’s only yours when she is out Warm your hands on her smile But beware of her wile She will woo you closer in Envelope you within her sin Saddened then, at her demise Blackened in her cold dead eyes Mastery of her passionate ire Douse you now, this passion’s fire. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! great passionate write, deVine lady. I don't mind the heat and the burn from this kind of fire. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Even after the fire dies, the light still flicker plays in my mind. Wonderful write. The "blaze" applauds!  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
daaaaannnnng!!!  love this If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
PoetD....were you wearing a particular hat and have a particular witchy friend with you when you wrote this. Excellently done, let me get my Asbestos, flame retardant suit.... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sharon: this is awesome . . . an autobiographical write? hehehe lmao sorry had to xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very seductive and passionately written |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, this one is  Sure am glad that you reposted it, Lady.  Hugs to you,  Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good jobber a very good write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! So pleased I didn't miss this one! Wonderful write..much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all!!! Since Arizona seems to be burning down around me I thought I'd repost my 'fire' poem. Sigh. Actually it's no where near me but it's so dry and hot here. This is definitely my last June in Arizona. Definitely!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Fire is such a beautiful Element to the eyes~  ARCTIC WIND |
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