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When Roses Bloom |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Anxious arms wait to hold you once more. When shall you come to the one that fought oceans of fear to love you? I no longer fear to love you! All my nakedness has been seen by you. All my weaknesses exposed All my strengths wrapped like petals in your rose! The rose I gave to you The rose I shall give to you The many roses I will lay for you towards the aisle as we step down the final mile Try yes, we need to exist as two Its really up to you Arm in arm again hand in hand again we must take the next step to hold each other again to embrace again my fears you have exposed I long to be embraced for you are Ma Vie en Rose @-} When my dear, will you hold me close? What bridges left are there for us to cross? What you have revealed, I do not shy away! Its my love that fought! Its your love that stays. please my love, step my way... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I love roses, especially Gold ones! enjoyed your love poetry! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kenneth: Welcome to PIP! What a beautiful sentiment and an amazing entrance. You will love it here This is . . . memories lovely indeed Please check your email for a special greeting from everyone at Passions! xxoo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! You're going to enjoy it here, and I'm looking forward to reading more, and meeting your muse... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Welcome, what a stunning read...I to am a new member and it is refreshing to read all this talent, warm hearts and smiles given from the deepest part of a poets soul...thank you kindly for the write and read...lovely |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Kenneth, this is a beautiful romantic debut, sweet friend, there is no shame in having love reveal the weaknesses in someone, for they only mend when felt by another! This is a flowery first post, sweet friend, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kenneth, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful eart, sweet Kenneth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
All my strengths wrapped like petals in your rose! This is so pretty martiniat8~ That's a cute handle.  A wonderful first post, and welcome to Passions. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to PIP! I love your first entry, beautifully romantic, full of longing and with a charming last sentence "Ma vie en rose". Lovely! Love, Margherita |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Enjoyed this immensely! Truly a work of genuine love and a remarkable entrance into the forum! Beautiful write! WELCOME! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
thanks y'all sure know how 2 give a warm welcome |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Great first Write!~ ARCTIC WIND |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
gee thanks for the comment, you really dug this one up from obscurity. I dont even remember writing it. Ive been visiting ocassionally but havent posted here in years. Maybe I'll start again. Thanks for your comment Arctic : ) |
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