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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2003-06-21 05:22 AM


Anxious arms wait to hold you once more.
When shall you come to the one
that fought oceans of fear to love you?

I no longer fear to love you!

All my nakedness has been seen by you.
All my weaknesses exposed

All my strengths
wrapped like petals
in your rose!

The rose I gave to you
The rose I shall give to you
The many roses
I will lay for you
towards the aisle
as we step down
the final mile

Try yes,
we need to exist as two
Its really up to you

Arm in arm again
hand in hand again
we must take the next step
to hold each other again
to embrace again

my fears you have exposed
I long to be embraced
for you are Ma Vie en Rose

@-}

When my dear,
will you hold me close?

What bridges left
are there
for us to cross?

What you have revealed,
I do not shy away!

Its my love that fought!
Its your love
that stays.

please my love,
step my way...


© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-06-21 05:38 AM


I love roses, especially Gold ones!
enjoyed your love poetry!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2003-06-21 05:46 AM


Kenneth:
Welcome to PIP!
What a beautiful sentiment
and an amazing entrance.
You will love it here
This is . . .  memories
lovely indeed
Please check your email for a special greeting from everyone at Passions!
xxoo  

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-06-21 07:28 AM



Welcome to Passions!  You're going to enjoy it here, and I'm looking forward to reading more, and meeting your muse...

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-06-21 08:14 AM


Welcome, what a stunning read...I to am a new member and it is refreshing to read all this talent, warm hearts and smiles given from the deepest part of a poets soul...thank you kindly for the write and read...lovely
Nightshade
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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-06-21 10:29 AM






Enjoyed your first post!!

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-06-21 03:29 PM




(smiles) Oh Kenneth, this is a beautiful romantic debut, sweet friend, there is no shame in having love reveal the weaknesses in someone, for they only mend when felt by another! This is a flowery first post, sweet friend, yay, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kenneth, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful eart, sweet Kenneth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2003-06-21 03:46 PM


All my strengths
wrapped like petals
in your rose!

This is so pretty martiniat8~  
That's a cute handle.  
A wonderful first post, and welcome to Passions.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
8 posted 2003-06-21 06:03 PM


Welcome to PIP! I love your first entry, beautifully romantic, full of longing and with a charming last sentence "Ma vie en rose".
Lovely!
Love, Margherita

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
Washington
9 posted 2003-06-21 06:36 PM


Enjoyed this immensely!
Truly a work of genuine love
and a remarkable entrance into
the forum!

Beautiful write!
WELCOME!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
10 posted 2003-06-22 06:33 PM


thanks y'all sure know how 2 give a warm welcome

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
11 posted 2008-08-07 03:56 PM


Great first Write!~


ARCTIC WIND

martiniat8
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Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
12 posted 2008-08-07 07:32 PM


gee thanks for the comment, you really dug this one up from obscurity. I dont even remember writing it. Ive been visiting ocassionally but havent posted here in years. Maybe I'll start again. Thanks for your comment Arctic : )
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