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praying you will smile |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I will show your hands the way come here naked now to me I will stand here just as new come here, still my trembling and I blush and blush again knowing that you saw me there gazing shyly through my hair hanging in my face praying you will smile. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Absolutely...James |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Prayers DO get answered! Terrific write! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Gasp! Great write! Love, Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You made me smile.  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You started my day very nicely, thank you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now you've done it, serene witchygal, you've MADE me smile, even through a blinding headache! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, yes......  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karen, you're words are amazing. I think I have told you that before....but I will continue to .... always. Chris |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
*closing the door* oops -- sorry, didn't know anyone was in here.. just.. um...  carry on.. now.. um... *placing the 'Do Not Disturb' sign on the knob* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Positively beamin' baby!!!!!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Prayers answered.  Thank you. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
God Karen - this is beautiful . . . xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, Lady, from the replies your prayers were definitely answered.  A lot said in a few words, huh? Hugs to ya  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-22-2003 06:05 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful thoughts and a lovely mind... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
 Sorry...couldn't resist..LOL. Love ya, lady... "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (06-22-2003 08:39 PM).] |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
time what do we do with it, Kindly, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you - a blusher !!!!!!!!!!! oh come now........... this is very pretty, very sweet , and soft |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Karen..who wouldn't smile? You radiate beauty! As for me, I smile every time I see a new poem by you...so thank you for making me smile. Susan |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful poetry! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
oh dear, how lovely! ~ Enjoyed this ARCTIC WIND |
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