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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-06-21 11:02 PM

picking off petals
she loves me she loves me not
yellow daisy stem

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

eminor_angel
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since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

1 posted 2003-06-21 11:03 PM

Cute. I've never seen a yellow daisy, are they the same as black-eyed susans?

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-06-21 11:28 PM

petals on the wind
he gathers them together
long distance lover

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-06-22 07:11 AM

Cute write!
Let us know if she does or doesn't!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

4 posted 2003-06-22 09:31 AM

Such a tender write!

Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-06-22 09:35 AM

QjQ
Good one.

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
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6 posted 2003-06-22 09:43 AM

thank you all for your replys,, i treasure them...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2003-06-22 10:01 AM

Very nice, Q. I shall try a haiku very soon. You inspired me.

Patricia

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

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A Mountain Paradise

8 posted 2003-06-22 08:43 PM

Hooray ... absolutely fantastic!!

Exactly the way a haiku should read!

Hugs ... Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

9 posted 2003-06-23 06:53 AM

thanks pat and marti your comments are treasured,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

10 posted 2003-06-23 07:59 AM

very cool!

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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11 posted 2003-06-23 04:45 PM

nice

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

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12 posted 2003-06-23 05:31 PM

thanks dixie,, vandana,, your replys are treasured...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2008-08-12 10:04 PM

Nice Haiku!

ARCTIC WIND

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