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Dream State |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Asleep and yet to wake life in the fold, ready to bake ever so convinced it's all real loss of luster...sex appeal choice of life..ready to be picked people show the way..some of them licked the habit to get to the church on time the habit to continue pointless rhymes awake from the body that lies inclined asleep on a bed that changed in time covered in sheets I lie in linened gauze... still to figure out my entry and cause... to figure out, indeed to analyse nascent distrust..what lies in lies what lies in the nature of the inclined mass what holds up truth, when time comes to pass that the body awake from its eternal dream like Munch in possession of a silent scream... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-22-2003 11:51 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Every now and then we try to figure out ... Powerful write. Very well done. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOVED THIS ONE! And Munch's painting is the epitome of humanity's facial expression of pain, sorrow, anguish, frustration, despair. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Martin: this rings true within my own heart as well still to figure out my entry and cause... amazing write here xxoo |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Margherita, Midnite, Littlewing Still trying to figure out purpose...and until I can get to that...I've likened it to a body that is forever asleep |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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