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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-20 09:23 PM

as the RhythMs of the rain
accompany the night,

i could feel you sloWly........
slip inside,

between raindrops and heartbeats
the distance sheds,

the chains come loose,

the bond between transcending time,

between raindrops and heartbeats
the longing subsides,

i can hold your sweet face

as the rain reminds,

get lost in your brown eyes,

feel you inside,

watch you surrender,

make you mine..

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-22-2003 01:24 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-20 10:27 PM

"watch you surrender

make you mine"

Good write

A wonderous amount of passion flows throughout the words written here.

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

2 posted 2003-06-21 01:00 AM

Well I'd heard you were good ... now I've read it for myself.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-06-21 01:21 AM

the bond between
transcending time,

between raindrops
and heartbeats
the longing subsides,

I knew you had in you the whole time! lol~
This is so pretty girlielocks~ Kind of like your hair!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-21 03:41 AM

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-06-21 06:51 AM

yes, good but subdued in here,
read in love for two.....Mature for more heat

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-21 11:48 AM

god Michele this is beautiful
I do hope you reach that rhythm . . .
This made me feel so at peace
It is lovely . . .
xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-06-21 11:25 PM

thanks,
yes something about the movement and rhythm
of the rain during the deep night hours
in particular.........

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-06-22 12:32 PM

yw . . . yes EXACTLY
raining here . . .

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

9 posted 2003-06-22 01:25 AM

I don't know about anybody else here, but I see a bit of steam rising !

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2008-08-05 07:16 PM

Really liked the ending to your poem Ink!-- It's raining where I live right now. Don't you just love rain storms?

ARCTIC WIND

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