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Open Poetry #27
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where the wild flowers grow
0 posted 2003-06-21 02:28 PM

My headphones have broken,
What could I do?
The speakers alone can't seem to
pic up the best parts of this tune.

Not only
does the bass sound low but
the words don't pronounciate themselves
as strongly, as to
cover the emotion of
a song..

I can't enjoy
the rythm and the ryhme without
my headphones, it sounds less
sublime ..
I can't dance
my way to
heaven's luminescent gates..
I'll never
be able to get to that place

With broken headphones, and speakers
with no bass.
© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2003-06-23 12:56 PM

Oh I like this one...
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-06-23 01:27 PM

I know how this is. LOL It sucks. Great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart
Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-08-11 02:30 PM

Enjoyed the Write


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