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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-06-20 02:33 AM


I've been tap
dancing so long
mistaken disco
ball
glitter
for the very stretch of stars--

will you love me if I stop?

Can I toss the gold lame'?
Push the spoon away as child
firmly saying
"NO--no more"

I danced and danced until I dropped.

Oh will you love me anyway
without my feather fans?
Spandex skin of substitute

the last thing that I ever popped.

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with you
1 posted 2003-06-20 02:38 AM


who wouldn't love you? dance or stand still, I'm sure it wouldn't matter...
Edder
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2 posted 2003-06-20 04:53 AM


"Oh will you love me anyway
without my feather fans?"

silly question....of course i would!

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-20 05:09 AM


yes, I would love you, silly
inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-06-20 08:28 AM


love without the feathers......
thats true love, does it exist?

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-06-20 08:57 AM


Oh this one grabbed me by the title!
Reminded me of 'I'm dancing as fast as I can'
which I do believe was/is a movie.
Ya know, you take away all the glitz and feathers
and we're still gonna love ya lady!
~Hugs YOU!~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

vandana
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6 posted 2003-06-20 09:57 AM


enjoyed
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-06-20 10:15 AM


Dont even go there or I will come there and slap you  . . .lol

umm . . .  YES
xxoo

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just out of reach
8 posted 2003-06-20 10:20 AM


Can I toss the gold lame'?
Push the spoon away as child
firmly saying
"NO--no more

Yes you can and you have!
Bravo dear heart. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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9 posted 2003-06-20 10:24 AM


Can I toss the gold lame'?
Push the spoon away as child
firmly saying
"NO--no more"

I danced and danced until I dropped.

Oh will you love me anyway
without my feather fans?
Spandex skin of substitute


Karen, how could someone not love a person as lovable as you are?

I do know where a thought like this would come from, though....especially when you've been the life of the party for so long....

Sometimes, my friend, we just have to find another party with different people attending it. I know it hurts, but it's true. When something's hurting us, we have to move on sometimes.


I had to, and it gets lonely sometimes, when away from the friends you had for so long.

Sorry for running my mouth, Lady, but this struck something in me this morning.  

Heart hugs to you, Lady          
Ethel

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standing on a shadow's lace
10 posted 2003-06-20 10:43 AM


love and respect you ...for going on...h
icebox
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in the shadows
11 posted 2003-06-20 12:20 PM


This made me smile.  Thank you, it helps this day.
Martie
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12 posted 2003-06-20 12:23 PM


serenity

You dance even when you're standing still.  

brian sites
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13 posted 2003-06-20 12:23 PM


smile
you worry too much

plaintive this

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
14 posted 2003-06-20 12:46 PM



Karen... ...lots of 'em.

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Krawdad
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15 posted 2003-06-20 12:50 PM


Oh, but keep one feather for the tease, ok?
serenity blaze
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16 posted 2003-06-20 01:15 PM




geeeeeeeeeez....

KISS ME PEOPLE!!! (Guess who's feeling better and a little antsy?) Uh OH...

I'll be good, tho.

Thanks good poets. Love to all.

Duncan
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17 posted 2003-06-20 06:01 PM


Was never the feathers I noticed.  You're a sweetheart, ya know it?  
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
18 posted 2003-06-20 09:41 PM


Aye.. yer daft thing.. of cerse we woods
Paula Finn
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missouri
19 posted 2003-06-23 01:05 PM


Yeah you can stop dancing...but I swear if you start singing I'm out the door!!! Just kidding darlin'...love ya Gemini twin
Ceinwyn
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20 posted 2003-06-23 01:12 PM


lol couldn't resist!!

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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Georgia
21 posted 2003-06-23 01:54 PM


Awesome
Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-08-11 02:32 PM


I can't dance for the life of me. But a pip, i got some good moves

lol
ARCTIC WIND

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