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Poet Rising
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Poet Rising Golden bar not of precious metal Iced rod to measure deftness level Should it be heaved to lofty place I shall descend to depth’s disgrace Then attempt ascent to exalted peak? Or admit defeat in moment weak? Forbid my rising for growing pain Suffer not my ego great disdain Of poet’s unveil, night introspect I seek standard measure to respect Thus choose not abandon verse I love With own bar of measure I rise above |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
there ya are....your way, why not? As each new day brings more.. As each new thought is born upon the page.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Patricia~ And rise you do, my dear poetess~ Keep it up ... versing becomes you well~ That which you do with ease ... is that which will please~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When, perchance, a poet's pen begs the question of now and then to find an answer within one's ink making one to stop, ponder, then think and from within, to raise one's bar tells a reader "I shall go far, let not writer's wall forbid my way for I have much, so much, to say..." If I may, then, walk this path with you, to pen such thought as to leave in blue and around us shall gather a circle of friends to bid you well, and beg you never end the song that is within your heart, and poetry is where you've found your start... ~*~ Am I proud of you? Yes, yes, indeed! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 way too cool! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
marvelous write filled with exploration of all possiblity, allowing fear to disintegrate with the dust, and climb any mountain....we confront. Lovely |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Thus choose not abandon verse I love With own bar of measure I rise above terrific closeing,, and a terrific write... A voice of honesty |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You do rise above! Absolutely impressive. Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is exquisite! This is pure poetry!! Very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enchantress is Definitely right!-- "Pure Poetry"  ARCTIC WIND |
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