Open Poetry #27 |
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When Dreams Live The Souls Of Poets |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
To grasp the quill in soaring flight and fly beyond imagined thought.. Yes, beyond... A breath of grieve upon the page, the tear in shimmering rest. A breath of life, the vaunted sage..in search the poet’s quest. Woven weave of silken sleeve, of scarf upon the chill. Words of heart’s true belief, in want the vintage swill. A toasted taste, of post and paste as words become one’s life. Writ not in haste, nor mindful chaste, of love, of life...of strife. To clutch the breath in halted pause, to feel the heart upon the skip. To see the read of wanted awes....to toast, to taste and lightly sip. A shuddered sigh, and stifled cry, as words of mind are penned on white. A stuttered sigh, a misted eye, this love of one’s soul touching write. A dream, a dream...a destiny....to pen the vaulted page. A hope, desire....a want to be...be known a poet’s sage. First Star....till morning’s light |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh .... this is so beautifully touching.... ah the Poet's sensitive soul! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, You out did yourself, excellent write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...saved! 'Nuff said? ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Tremendous poem...can't say enough good about it. Beautifully written and beautifully expressed. ***Ivy Rose |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I love the way you write. Very well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Barry... ..and you know who is sighing up in Canada! ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
A toasted taste, of post and paste as words become one’s life. Writ not in haste, nor mindful chaste, of love, of life...of strife. nice lines Barry.... you do this so well and so smoothly it appear to be efffortless... I'm envious... lol |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes.... Beyond. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a stuttered sigh a misty eye what lines! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific write n read ,,,, A voice of honesty |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is wonderful, Barry. I learn so much just by reading your verses. Patricia |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Great poetry, enjoyed it, I really liked the title. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
breathtakingly beautiful...I'm speechless, and that sir is an accomplishment on your part...hehehehhe...thank you for writing and sharing such a wondrous poetry in motion |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A shuddered sigh, and stifled cry, as words of mind are penned on white. A stuttered sigh, a misted eye, this love of one’s soul touching write. A dream, a dream...a destiny....to pen the vaulted page. A hope, desire....a want to be...be known a poet’s sage. First Star....till morning’s light Barry, my friend, you tell it so well... ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Magnus...James |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just wonderful, Barry. Sandra |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
With a shuddered sigh, the tear is still shimmering in front of my eye... Beautifully done, Magnus. CG |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write Magnus! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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