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The Swing
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The Swing |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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The Swing Spring eats tomorrow out of our hands We shall walk on stone hot coals As we teach time in our mirror to gaze while floating on earth Image running on atmosphere…with the air Living chastely in the midst of temptations For our delivered day Words float through open windows No more sweating in the nights Mood is ominous, voices relaxed I imagine filled pages where fingers move While the sea caresses opening visions to the world Calling up all types of shapes and colors Wearing a coat filled with us Rendering diplomas to the touch Growing larger, becoming cloth Filling the earth with soft green light Such a fragrance, dancing clear syllables and sounds Like tender mangos, dreamlike poems fill our glass Drinking brooks and music Falling next to you in the moonlight Deep in my mind, heart and soul you shine forever We stubbornly grow liberty In our very own ways…deeply breathing you Flowering fields We are a strong splendid tree Connecting centers of a civilization We ascend to the music of homage Where open hours live with us Carnations explode, in the thick of violets Conveying a remarkable intensity of emotion With out one word spoken |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: So many layers in this...but this particular part caught my eye...something about continued growth, going beyond where imagination might lead us...and green...all of that...touched me. Thank you, Lee. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Lee, so many thoughts here that I enjoyed, filled my mind with more pondering and sights, thank you for that, great work. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Your symbols have creamed a lotion And have created an ocean. Wonderful write. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I strongly agree with Sunshine-- Wonderful read  ARCTIC WIND |
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