Open Poetry #27 |
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This For JamesM |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
He Inspired Somberly, I took this walk my eyes just staring, not to miss. The air surrounding touched me light, the breezes gently giving kiss. I thought about that face of one whose smile would light the evening sky that more than shone her love of life, and shared with me, each breathless sigh. I turned my head down towards the ground, releasing hold of thoughts that be. There in gold, a heart was found. I picked it up to closer see. Maybe a message, for this time of loneliness, in which was caught, my feelings pondering the "whys" with wishes of those smiles, I sought. I raised my eyes until they met hers of heaven, bluer still. Attractions held, then words were said and there a gift, of moment's will. Her beauty was beneath her smile, outshining heart in hand of mine. Reaching out so tenderly, I placed it now in hand of thine. Allowing moment to center on a friendly discourse leading way to evening of, in arms to dance. She in mine, now memory's stay. ~~*~~ So never doubt that fate exists, even if so short in time, because this story told of now his happenstance, I've placed in rhyme. M * thank you JamesM. for your inspiring story. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautifully done Maureen, Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hello Keth, nice to see you. James placed that little story as a reply to a poem of mine in # 26...inspired a write from me. So I thank him for that. hugs M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MAUREEN, I must go along with Kethry, beautifully done. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you SY...it's not often the rhymes take off on me anymore... hugs M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful! I so love to see how we inspire each other. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Margherita. It's such a dreary day once again here..poured all day yesterday... and is about to today, so I am going to leave here now in search of some light *s ![]() M |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely written... A voice of honesty |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Glenn...it was just an idea. *s M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Simply beautiful thoughts and expression Maureen...yes, she has a gold heart and I have sweet memories of her...thank you for adding some new sweet thoughts...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen...Very beautifully done...and made even more dear because of the inspire. ![]() |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Just perfect, Maureen. Flow was beautiful and the words just wonderful. Patricia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
James, your words touched me in your response and my mind then took over. Thank you for both your words and kind responses. Martie, Thank you, sometimes the inspiration surprises me. Patricia, thank you for reading M |
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SuperDave Junior Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 48Little House on the Hill |
Well done, rhyming or free you are good. David |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Dave. Nice to see you here as I check in. Doing my spring cleaning and gardening now, and trying to catch my life up to where it should be. I hope all is well in your world. hugss M |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Nice Write Nakdthoughts! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you again, AW ![]() M |
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