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Open Poetry #27
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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2003-06-21 02:47 AM

He Sleeps

tonight he
sleeps in
his dreams
and I
wonder about
this peace
will it
take him
to places
he misses
and has
never been
but tonight
I know
he sleeps
in dreams
sleep softly
sleep safe
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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-21 03:26 AM

they look so peaceful when they sleep, don't they?
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2003-06-21 03:38 AM

Aenimal said...i'm off to sleep its safer there on a post to another poem...and it inspired me...h
Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
3 posted 2003-06-21 11:41 AM

and when they awaken from a nightmare afraid and alone we tell them everything is all right.  Are we lying?

ah parenthood....
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-06-21 12:07 PM

You're a beautiful soul H thank you, yes it was nicer there, though I dont remember dreams much..See this is why I'm still hoping for a coma..just a little one..a little rest and relaxation from this..sssshhhhh...er..stuff we go through..besides I'm tired of shaving..hugs..for you
littlewing
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New York
5 posted 2003-06-21 01:10 PM

very nice Helen . . .

makes me want to sleep a sweet slumber
myself . . .
xxoo
nobody
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6 posted 2003-06-21 01:32 PM

hmmm....sleep,thats such a good idea
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Saluting with misty eyes
7 posted 2003-06-21 01:37 PM

Helen- This is a very good write. You are truly one of the best here.

Once in a dream, far beyond these castle walls...
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
8 posted 2003-06-26 02:35 AM

....and yet another one!
Artic Wind
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9 posted 2009-03-30 07:47 PM

Sleep tight, sweet dreams


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